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A World Alone Ch. 5Chapter 5:Love RekindledAfter the speech by Anubis, Star and David went to their quarters. Once there, they sat not looking at each other, they were told to room together by Anuben and they were still not comfortable with it. Finally Star sighed, she could not believe they were doing this. She turned to David."Dave?"He looked at her. "Yeah?""What are we doing?"He raised an eyebrow. "Sitting here.""Exactly, we used to be so comfortable with each other, even when we slept together."He thought that over and saw what she was saying and smiled. "I see what you mean now." He sighed. "I guess it's been a long time."She got up and walked over to him. "Hon, was I the last girl you were with?"He nodded. "Yes, I
I tried to date, but couldn't. I looked for you too much. No other woman could love me in the way you did."Star's mouth dropped open. "You
you never got over me did you?"He shook his head slowly. "Nope, I couldn't. You were the only one I could think of, especially
Sonic's Adventures Story 2Marble RunSonic entered into the Marble Run area and stopped abruptly. The area seemed unusually hot even for such a lush, green place like this. He took out his radio and called Tails."He little bro. Got any info on this place and why it's so hot? Whew, I could cook a Chili Dog just by putting it on the ground."Tails' voice came back, laughing. "You actually are pretty close, Sonic. About five to ten feet below your sneakers is a massive collection of lava-filled chambers. I also detected that robotic fox leaving the area so be careful of traps."Sonic groaned at that. He remembered Dan Prowler and his "training" and hoped that this would not be as bad. "Great. Thanks for the warning, little bro.""Any time, Sonic. See you on the other side."Sonic looked up to see the Tornado wing away towards the highway in the sky and then looked ahead, sighing. He began to jog and soon came across some new badniks made for this area. He found the bee bot again but now he saw a caterpiller type